Thi vo hamesha saath meri har lamhe
aaj juda kar diya jaise kabhi nahi mile
suru hui duri na samaj lamho ke khel se
badhti hui bani zindgi dur jaise saanso se
yaade hi ban gai he sahara unki kaise kahe
gum ke aansoo hi sahara he lage kaise kahe
judai unki hame maar degi ek din kaise kahe
khuda na kare aisa kaher ham par na dhaye
intazaar ka kitna lamba he lamha tu hi bata de
sailaab-e-aanso kabtak he bahana tu hi bata de
aaj juda kar diya jaise kabhi nahi mile
suru hui duri na samaj lamho ke khel se
badhti hui bani zindgi dur jaise saanso se
yaade hi ban gai he sahara unki kaise kahe
gum ke aansoo hi sahara he lage kaise kahe
judai unki hame maar degi ek din kaise kahe
khuda na kare aisa kaher ham par na dhaye
intazaar ka kitna lamba he lamha tu hi bata de
sailaab-e-aanso kabtak he bahana tu hi bata de
9 comments:
nice poem but difficult to read.
achchaa khayal hai...
yaade hi ban gai he sahara unki kaise kahe
gum ke aansoo hi sahara he lage kaise kahe
^ kuch kahe bina sab kuch kahe diyaa.. bahut hi accha likha hai..ileshji..keepit up
bahut khoobsurati se dard ko piro diya hai aapne...
sunitashanoo
bahut sundar Ilesh ji,
intazaar ka kitna lamba he lamha tu hi bata de
sailaab-e-aanso kabtak he bahana tu hi bata de
achchhi shayri hai
अच्छी रचना है, प्रस्तुतिकरण भी सुन्दर है। बधाई।
suru hui duri na samaj lamho ke khel se
badhti hui bani zindgi dur jaise saanso se
wow very nice poetry i saw this first time very nice your poems and your blog too good
pahli bar is blog par aana hua.
ek achhi poem padne ko mili.
*intazaar ka kitna lamba he lamha tu hi bata de
sailaab-e-aanso kabtak he bahana tu hi bata de*
Touchy lines...
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