Saturday, July 26, 2008

~*~sailaab-e-aansoo~*~

9 comments:

शोभा said...

nice poem but difficult to read.

Pramod Kumar Kush 'tanha' said...

achchaa khayal hai...

* મારી રચના * said...

yaade hi ban gai he sahara unki kaise kahe
gum ke aansoo hi sahara he lage kaise kahe

^ kuch kahe bina sab kuch kahe diyaa.. bahut hi accha likha hai..ileshji..keepit up

सुनीता शानू said...

bahut khoobsurati se dard ko piro diya hai aapne...

sunitashanoo

अभिन्न said...

bahut sundar Ilesh ji,
intazaar ka kitna lamba he lamha tu hi bata de
sailaab-e-aanso kabtak he bahana tu hi bata de

achchhi shayri hai

admin said...

अच्छी रचना है, प्रस्तुतिकरण भी सुन्दर है। बधाई।

मोहन वशिष्‍ठ said...

suru hui duri na samaj lamho ke khel se
badhti hui bani zindgi dur jaise saanso se

wow very nice poetry i saw this first time very nice your poems and your blog too good

PREETI BARTHWAL said...

pahli bar is blog par aana hua.
ek achhi poem padne ko mili.

डाॅ रामजी गिरि said...

*intazaar ka kitna lamba he lamha tu hi bata de
sailaab-e-aanso kabtak he bahana tu hi bata de*

Touchy lines...