pyaar..., pyaar ka dard..., pyaar ke dard ki shikayat..., pyaar ke drd ki shikayat me apnapan sb kuchh to hai aapke kaavya meiN.! achhi rachna hai...badhaaee...!! ---MUFLIS---
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bahut sunder....bahut dil ko chu lene waale bhaaw hai
very beautiful song,ilesh ji there is some script faults in ur hindi font you can use orkut hindi or unicode ..anyway i
ts impressive one...
bahut khub hai.
pyaar...,
pyaar ka dard...,
pyaar ke dard ki shikayat...,
pyaar ke drd ki shikayat me apnapan
sb kuchh to hai aapke kaavya meiN.!
achhi rachna hai...badhaaee...!!
---MUFLIS---
खूबसूरत भाव .थोड़ी सी लिपि और अच्छी हो तो और सुंदर लगेगा
Sunder Rchana ... Achchhi lagi aapki kavita...
... नव वर्ष में / रचित करें, खुशहाल घर / खुशहाल राज्य, खुशहाल राष्ट्र / बिखेरें खुशियाँ-खुशबू-रौशनी / चहूँ ओर ...
... नव वर्ष की हार्दिक शुभकामनाएँ।
aap bahut accha likhte hai . itni acchi gazal ke liye meri badhai sweekar karen.
sir , pls visit my blog for my poems. http://poemsofvijay.blogspot.com/
dhanyawad.
vijay
behad samvedansheelata se vichar ujagar kiyen hain .
हिन्दी में लिखा देख अच्छा लगा ..अगर गूगल का इंडिक ट्रांस्लित्रेअते इस्तेमाल करेगी तो आसानी होगी.....कविता में आपके भावः झलकते है....
भाव तो लाज़बाब हैं. बस कुछ मात्रा दोष है जो धीरे धीरे ठीक हो जायेगा. बधाई.
Happy basant panchmi!!!!!!!
bhut sunder..............
Ilesh Ji
gum-e-mohabbat ..... bhawnaaon ka prawaah dil ko chhu gaya
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