Thursday, December 18, 2008

~*~Gum-E-Mohabbat~*~

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15 comments:

Manvinder said...

bahut sunder....bahut dil ko chu lene waale bhaaw hai

"SURE" said...

very beautiful song,ilesh ji there is some script faults in ur hindi font you can use orkut hindi or unicode ..anyway i
ts impressive one...

Bahadur Patel said...

bahut khub hai.

MUFLIS said...

pyaar...,
pyaar ka dard...,
pyaar ke dard ki shikayat...,
pyaar ke drd ki shikayat me apnapan
sb kuchh to hai aapke kaavya meiN.!
achhi rachna hai...badhaaee...!!
---MUFLIS---

shyam kori 'uday' said...

very good.

अनुपम अग्रवाल said...

खूबसूरत भाव .थोड़ी सी लिपि और अच्छी हो तो और सुंदर लगेगा

Dev said...

Sunder Rchana ... Achchhi lagi aapki kavita...

shyam kori 'uday' said...

... नव वर्ष में / रचित करें, खुशहाल घर / खुशहाल राज्य, खुशहाल राष्ट्र / बिखेरें खुशियाँ-खुशबू-रौशनी / चहूँ ओर ...
... नव वर्ष की हार्दिक शुभकामनाएँ।

Vijay Kumar Sappatti said...

aap bahut accha likhte hai . itni acchi gazal ke liye meri badhai sweekar karen.

sir , pls visit my blog for my poems. http://poemsofvijay.blogspot.com/

dhanyawad.

vijay

Renu Sharma said...

behad samvedansheelata se vichar ujagar kiyen hain .

डॉ .अनुराग said...

हिन्दी में लिखा देख अच्छा लगा ..अगर गूगल का इंडिक ट्रांस्लित्रेअते इस्तेमाल करेगी तो आसानी होगी.....कविता में आपके भावः झलकते है....

राजीव करूणानिधि said...

भाव तो लाज़बाब हैं. बस कुछ मात्रा दोष है जो धीरे धीरे ठीक हो जायेगा. बधाई.

purnima said...

Happy basant panchmi!!!!!!!

bhut sunder..............
Ilesh Ji

रश्मि प्रभा said...

gum-e-mohabbat ..... bhawnaaon ka prawaah dil ko chhu gaya

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